.::. Lonely & Longing .::.
Patience is running out,
Kindness is nearing limits,
You have left me full of doubt,
It seems you'll never commit.
Kindness is nearing limits,
You have left me full of doubt,
It seems you'll never commit.
posted by Phantasmal Spectre at 1:32 PM
3 Comments:
Very nice written, i like it.
I just wanted to say thanks for the link to my site and to let you know about Poets101.com a poetry aggregator that I hope you will submit your RSS feed to. -Billy
A short yet effective poem...seams as though you are describing a relationship that you'd like to take further, but the other is not quite on the same wave length of thought. I did feel however, that this could use a bit more to strengthen it and give it some more substance to sink the readers teeth into. I like your logo, nice design. I am created a link to your site from my own.
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