Tuesday, January 17, 2006

.::. Lonely & Longing .::.

Patience is running out,
Kindness is nearing limits,
You have left me full of doubt,
It seems you'll never commit.

3 Comments:

Blogger Raj said...

Very nice written, i like it.

Friday, March 10, 2006  
Blogger Billy Jones said...

I just wanted to say thanks for the link to my site and to let you know about Poets101.com a poetry aggregator that I hope you will submit your RSS feed to. -Billy

Sunday, April 02, 2006  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

A short yet effective poem...seams as though you are describing a relationship that you'd like to take further, but the other is not quite on the same wave length of thought. I did feel however, that this could use a bit more to strengthen it and give it some more substance to sink the readers teeth into. I like your logo, nice design. I am created a link to your site from my own.

Friday, May 19, 2006  

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